Sure enough, I tuned in and was quickly reminded that editor, Simone Kaplan, had agreed to generously donate her time for 3, half-hour manuscript consultations. MY NAME WAS CALLED!!! I never win anything (except for a game of Bingo on a cruise back in 1995). I was so excited that I began trying to figure out which manuscript to send in for evaluation.
I selected a manuscript that I have been working on periodically for about 5 years. I have always loved the quirkiness of the main character. . . Simone did too. I have always enjoyed her playfulness and individuality. . . Simone did too. I have always thought that the readers would be anxious to turn the pages. . . Simone did not.
Not only did Simone and I spend a half an hour working together on how to remedy this page turning situation, we spent close to one full hour! We brainstormed together about a variety of scenarios that the main character could experience. She helped to break down picture book structure for me in a way that it had not been done before--this really helped me as a visual learner.
I took copious notes throughout our conversation, and can't wait to get started on revising.
Do I think that this manuscript is going to turn into something that allows me to purchase a whole fleet of new cars? No, but I DO think that the experience of reworking this story in a variety of different ways will help me to become a better writer. After all, as an author I have a vision in my head of what my story is to look and feel like. The key, however, is relaying that vision to the readers. If my intentions are not clear to the readers, then I need to do what is necessary to get my story told in an effective way.
Thank you Katie for offering this drawing, I love your podcast and can't wait for the next one.
Thank you so much Simone donating your editorial services, and for taking the time to talk with me this morning. I know that I learned a lot from you, and I look forward to reintroducing Penelope-Mae to you after she has attended finishing school.
