My Consultation with Simone Kaplan

Several weeks ago I entered a contest on Katie Davis' blog in response to her podcast, Brain Burps About Books.  I had actually forgotten about it until one day I received an email from Katie letting me know that I had won something, and I had better listen to her next podcast.  

Sure enough, I tuned in and was quickly reminded that editor, Simone Kaplan, had agreed to generously donate her time for 3, half-hour manuscript consultations.  MY NAME WAS CALLED!!!  I never win anything (except for a game of Bingo on a cruise back in 1995).  I was so excited that I began trying to figure out which manuscript to send in for evaluation.


I selected a manuscript that I have been working on periodically for about 5 years.  I have always loved the quirkiness of the main character. . . Simone did too.  I have always enjoyed her playfulness and individuality. . . Simone did too.  I have always thought that the readers would be anxious to turn the pages. . . Simone did not.


Not only did Simone and I spend a half an hour working together on how to remedy this page turning situation, we spent close to one full hour!  We brainstormed together about a variety of scenarios that the main character could experience.  She helped to break down picture book structure for me in a way that it had not been done before--this really helped me as a visual learner.  


I took copious notes throughout our conversation, and can't wait to get started on revising.  


Do I think that this manuscript is going to turn into something that allows me to purchase a whole fleet of new cars?  No, but I DO think that the experience of reworking this story in a variety of different ways will help me to become a better writer.  After all, as an author I have a vision in my head of what my story is to look and feel like.  The key, however, is relaying that vision to the readers.  If my intentions are not clear to the readers, then I need to do what is necessary to get my story told in an effective way.


Thank you Katie for offering this drawing, I love your podcast and can't wait for the next one.


Thank you so much Simone donating your editorial services, and for taking the time to talk with me this morning.  I know that I learned a lot from you, and I look forward to reintroducing Penelope-Mae to you after she has attended finishing school.

Words From the Wise #2-- Julie Hedlund, Write Up My Life

For this week's edition of Words From the Wise, I have had the honor of interviewing Julie Hedlund.   I hope that you enjoy reading her thoughts as much as I have.  

Recently you have become quite active in the world of children's writing. How are you handling your new found fame?

Well, I certainly don’t consider it “fame,” but I do hope my activity is well received in the kidlit community.  Honestly after more than two years of blogging, attending conferences, participating in Twitter chats, etc., it’s nice to finally feel like I have a sense of the landscape – the “who’s who” of kidlit.  The best part is getting to know so many amazing authors and illustrators, many of whom I’ve met only recently through the 12 x 12 challenge.  And I will admit it’s a thrill when an author I’ve loved for ages “recognizes” my name.  Authors are, and always have been, celebrities to me!

Can you describe your personal writing process, and what is your favorite part?

Hmm.  This question makes me think I should have a better process!

For picture books, I typically write my first draft in one sitting.  I can do this because I mull stories around in my mind for ages before I ever write a word.  I usually think that first draft is SO GOOD. 

Then I let the draft sit for a while and come back to revise.  By then I think the draft is NOT SO GOOD.  It’s usually about 2-3 revisions later before I feel it’s ready to be shared with my critique partners.  After that, it’s anyone’s guess.  I have one PB that I’ve probably revised 100 times and my CPs have seen it at least half a dozen times.  One of my more recent ones only required a couple of critique group go-rounds.  Hopefully that means I’m getting better at drafting!

My favorite part of the process is writing the first draft and then the first couple of revisions.  I love it when the story is still all mine and nobody has seen it yet.  It’s like my little secret. J

You are excellent at marketing yourself. What are some of the key elements for a new writer in getting themselves noticed? How can a newly published author really get the word out about their work?

Well, for full disclosure, I don’t (yet) have a book I’ve marketed, but I have worked hard to build an online presence so that when I do have something to promote, the network will be there.  This strategy worked very well when it came time to promote the 12 x 12 in 2012 challenge, for example.

So, establish a presence as soon as you know you want to be or will be published, because what you are doing is building relationships more than marketing.  If you want those relationships to be authentic, they need to grow organically and that takes some time.

There is so much information available on how to promote well.  Be a sponge and absorb as much as you can before making huge decisions about which promotion activities you are going to take on.  For children’s book authors, Katie Davis recently published an ebook called How to Promote Your Children’s Book: Tips, Tricks and Secrets to Creating a Bestseller.  This is the perfect place to start.

Who are some of your favorite picture book authors, and what draws you to their work?

My all-time favorite picture book author is Jane Yolen.  I love her because she can write anything, and everything she writes is amazing.  I dare you to look at her range of work and not be inspired.  Plus, she uses the most gorgeous language in her picture books and does not “write down” to kids.  Rather, she asks them to “rise up” to meet her stories.   

I won’t even try to list any others because once I start I won’t be able to stop!

What goals have you set for yourself with your writing? Do you have a plan on how to accomplish those goals?

It’s funny you ask that because this is the first year I’ve set concrete, measurable goals for my writing.  Writing at least 12 picture books in 2012 is one of them, but I have also established specific goals for querying and publishing in other venues.  For example, I want to publish magazine articles in both the children and adult market, and I plan to publish a storybook app.  I also have a nonfiction ebook for writers up my sleeve that I plan to publish before June. 

Julie Hedlund is a Picture Book author and Freelance Writer. She is the creator and host of the 12 x 12 in 2012 picture book writing challenge.  You can connect with Julie on her blog, Write Up My Life, on Twitter, and on Facebook.