Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Just one line. . .

Just one line is all I need to make my story complete.
Right now it's close, but not quite done, not quite nice and neat.

I know just what I want to say, but can't type it out just so,
The feelings are clear in my mind and I don't know which way to go.

All I need is just one line, and here I've written more,
Maybe I'll take an average, and even out the score.

My goal is to find that line, and finish it today,
The next step is to revise. . . but first I think I'll play!


  1. May that elusive last line find you today!

  2. Thanks for your good wishes! I think that I am simply thinking to hard. Maybe folding laundry will bring out the idea. . . I guess I'll try it!